Great idea!
Original. I think you should have used Flash's alpha effect insted of light blue for the ghosts; personally, I think that would have looked better... your voices were horrible, there was no emotion in it at all. That thing at the end about getting a job could be very dramatic indeed if it were said right. Like pauses. Realistic dialuge should have pauses. Just show some sort of emotion in your character's voices. Flat, even sentences just kill the mood. But still, nice work. Better than most of my movies, anyway.