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[Ghost Motel 2]

Great idea!

Original. I think you should have used Flash's alpha effect insted of light blue for the ghosts; personally, I think that would have looked better... your voices were horrible, there was no emotion in it at all. That thing at the end about getting a job could be very dramatic indeed if it were said right. Like pauses. Realistic dialuge should have pauses. Just show some sort of emotion in your character's voices. Flat, even sentences just kill the mood. But still, nice work. Better than most of my movies, anyway.

Violet-AIM responds:

When I had first started ghost motel(intro), a long time ago, I didn't know about the alpha stuff. Now that I do, I just left it that way since it was mostly all done like that. Also, because the ghosts/spirits are in the spiritual realm, they are not transparent, but in the physical world, the ghosts/spirits will look transparent. We'll work on the voices for next time, thanks for commenting.

[Gunfight 2]

decent

this movie isnt that great but these things ARE hard to make, and the way you can choose who dies is pretty cool. worth watching

Backflip responds:

hey, do you know whos a real fat bitch? all these fat bitches who write these reviews, go eat pork rinds assholes