Age/Gender: 22, Male
Location: SF bay area, CA
Job: I'm a minor.. guess!
It's me! The ponderously perplexing, perpetually perplexed NewAuk, everyone's favorite quixotic, nuerotic 14-year-old! (Void while inhibited. Some key fictions are pie.)
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102 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
Very very good graphics, excelent on that, but what else? You see the title "Space Dog", and the dog flying around, and a nift-o space backround, but there must be somthing more that that! Work on this, you show great animation/drawing skill.
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Bounce a George Clooney head around with a penis? Ugh. I'll pass.
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So, you're saying you reviewed it without playing it? Sheesh...
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Although I hate to admit it, the first 2 frames made me smile (I'm so ashamed), but your animation...sucks. Really really bad. Can't-even-use-a-simple-motio n-tween bad. Bad bad bad bad bad. Ugh....this is the case against the new voting system. The first few people rate it high, and everyone else falls into line for their special lucky bonus point.
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Original. I think you should have used Flash's alpha effect insted of light blue for the ghosts; personally, I think that would have looked better... your voices were horrible, there was no emotion in it at all. That thing at the end about getting a job could be very dramatic indeed if it were said right. Like pauses. Realistic dialuge should have pauses. Just show some sort of emotion in your character's voices. Flat, even sentences just kill the mood. But still, nice work. Better than most of my movies, anyway.
Author's Response:
When I had first started ghost motel(intro), a long time ago, I didn't know about the alpha stuff. Now that I do, I just left it that way since it was mostly all done like that. Also, because the ghosts/spirits are in the spiritual realm, they are not transparent, but in the physical world, the ghosts/spirits will look transparent. We'll work on the voices for next time, thanks for commenting.
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Could have had more dunks and tricks, you only have 5. Also, your animation is'nt exactly smooth, you should have motion-tweened the ball's action, and then drawn in the player, changing him each step of the way. Good idea, though, just excute more.
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Something intangible about this made me smile...
Say, did he just that grenade out of his crotch?
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I wish I were allowed to give you negative style points in this review, because the whole "stick figures killing each other" genre is just plain dumb. But the graphics were very nice in some spots, I admit. Very very good for your first movie! And long too. A few tips, even if I'm not qualified to give them:
- Use better fonts, or draw backround signs yourself. Times New Roman looks AWFUL in 'toons.
- Maybe a little better concepting and plot? I admit that I didn't do that in my movies, but I was young(er) and stupid(er) then, and I don't make Flash anymore, so that's why you don't see plot in "The Other Jump". Man, that was a stupid movie.
-Try to make your motions a bit better-looking...you should spend more time on detail...like when you made the tanks move by simple motion tweens on a drawing? Try using movie-clips to make moving wheels, stuff like that.
-And no more sticks. Please...
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The title said "Football" and I was thinking you meant American Football, but still, very good job, very good prgraming. The difficulty adjuster is a great idea for a feature, but there is one big problem with this game-- it seemed pretty un-beatable to me even at the lowest level of difficulty. Oh yeah, saves counter is cool.
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Ya i Live In Uk We Call It Football.. Some Fucking GAY TWATS On Here Dont Know About Uk Call It Football.. Well They Will Learn In Less They Are The Ones That Love Killer Borf! Cheers!
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either people are stupider that previously belived, or the author has been voting 5 every day.
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Very neat game! They may just be sticks but that animition makes up for that tenfold. Only problem: That pink guy is too hard. I started with ten lives and still couldn't beat 'im!!! I found out that using the X key and one of the arrow keys after you have hit a guy a few times, you can grab him and throw him backwards. At least, I think that's the combo, I only did it once, and by accident. Anyway...cool!
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